Error Paragraphs/Editing Section
8 th Unit: A-Reading: Jamaica Fragment - Para No: 45 from the List
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Write Your Answers
Write the corrected word or phrase for each numbered error (22–26). Submit your answers to receive marks, then review the explanations.
Correct (22): I puzzled within myself as I went down the road.
Explanation: The conjunction as is used to show two actions happening at the same time.
• because I went down the road ❌
• as I went down the road ✔️
Correct (23): Could it be that the little dark boy was the son of a servant in the home and therefore had to do the white boy's bidding?
Explanation: The verb be is required after “could it” to complete the structure.
• Could it that ❌
• Could it be that ✔️
Correct (24): They were obviously dressed alike; the little dark boy was of equal classwith his playmate.
Explanation: The earlier sentence is in past tense so, the correct phrase is was of equal class.
• the little dark boy is of equal class ❌
• the little dark boy was of equal class ✔️
Correct (25): I was sure of that.
Explanation: The preposition of is required after the adjective sure.
• I was sure with that ❌
• I was sure of that ✔️
Correct (26): Then how was it that he obeyed so faithfully the white boy's orders?
Explanation: The adverb faithfully correctly describes how he obeyed.
• obeyed so faithful ❌
• obeyed so faithfully ✔️